Monday, February 11, 2008

Jo ho gaya so accha hai

Num aankhon se usko kehte hue alvida maine
Aaj band kar diya hai apne jeewan ke ek panne ko

Us panne mein hain kuch khoobsoorat yaadein
Aur kaanton se lipte hue kuch lamhaat

Waheen par chod raha hoon kuch sawal tumhare waaste
Jinka jawab yadi na mile to accha hai

Jo meelon door rehte hue bhee paas thaa mere
Aaj mere paas hokar bhee rahe koson door to accha hai

Kuch ankahee baaton ko bhee chod kar aagaya hoon main
Ye mat poochna ki kyon khamosh reh gaya hoon main

Main naheen chahta ki tum phir palto us panne ko
Door ja raha hoon main ab door hee rahoon to accha hai

Kabhie miloge to anjaan ban jaoonga main
Aur tum soch lena ki jo ho gaya so accha hai

-Aditya Rohatgi

7 comments:

  1. bhaavon se bhari hai----------emotional kavita

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  2. Truth of life we make them cry who care for us, we cry for them who never
    care for us, and we care for them who will never cry for us...


    Isnt it beautifully written ??bitter truth of life which mostly none of us undstd..same is ur poem everythin that happend..happened for gud is wat it says but the fact is its beautifully wrapped "pain" nothing else..so u hv done a Gr8 job in expressing it so beautifully!!

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  3. Hmmmm, cool at least you have a way to express your pain.These lines really toughed me.

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    1. Sorry for responding so late .. didn't realize you posted on my blog !!!

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  5. The expression in my poem means - The one who was close to me even when we were miles apart.

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